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Given 2013-02-11
another relationship poem by ~gogocherryrose is "a complete thought, a complete image" (suggester's words). ( Suggested by tiganusi and Featured by neurotype )
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BluestWaves Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013
yes
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gogocherryrose Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013
no!


lol
:)
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BluestWaves Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
hahahaha

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gogocherryrose Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
:)
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UnspecifiedUnknown Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013   Writer
congrats love :heart:
this is simple, but beautiful, and full
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gogocherryrose Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
thank you :heart: xo
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Wordeea Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
that is so perfect. congrats again ! well deserved
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gogocherryrose Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013
Thanks :huggle:
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KissTheSunrise Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013
Congrats on the DD!! beautiful poem of losing love. :D :heart:
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gogocherryrose Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013
Thanks cuteness :huggle:

PS - I'm still waiting for my V-Day card shark biatch. :heart:
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KissTheSunrise Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013
I sent it .. wtf??
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gogocherryrose Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013
i got it now! :heart:

haha
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KissTheSunrise Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013
yaaaaayyyyy!! :heart:
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DancingInTwilight Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Student General Artist
*has been moping all day, comes in like an inchworm and flops over to mope more*
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gogocherryrose Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013
Awwe no cheer up little inchworm!! :aww:

Thank you for the favorite on this poem. :heart:
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mysdemeanor Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
The fact that I can actually see this happening as I read it is just... amazing. It's not a happy poem, but it's certainly a fantastic one in that it hits me right in the feels, haha. My congrats and compliments to you!
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gogocherryrose Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013
Right in the feels! I love that expression!

Haha not many of my poems are happy poems, that's truly my biggest challenge. Thanks for the compliments!!

:dance: :)
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LexiDreams Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013
This poem hurts. I love it.
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gogocherryrose Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013
Thank you :heart:
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ToxxicAsphyxiate Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013
This is beautiful, but scary in the way that it starts describing.. me.. x3
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gogocherryrose Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013
Eek! (well, please don't smoke so much) lol...

Thank you !! :heart:
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Dragonfly22 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I find fascinating that a piece of writing can have such a great effect on people and appeal to them merely by virtue of their capability of relating to its words; how that alone can be such a great source of beauty that they feel the need to share it with other people. And while I do can somehow relate to the words in this poem I honestly fail to see any beauty in the literary composition, itself. Please don't take offense in this, as I'm hardly a writer or even a critic. I find some of your pieces interesting and I'm in no way questioning your abilities as a writer, I just wanted to share a simple observation that called my attention. Congrats on the DD :)
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gogocherryrose Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013
Thanks! I know what you mean about the composition and honestly I feel like this isn't really the best piece to highlight from my gallery - but I am extremely grateful nonetheless! I remember when I wrote this, I think it took me less than a minute, it was just a personal reflection on something that I have been through, and so there is nothing really structured about it at all and I almost deleted it too! hehe. :)
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Dragonfly22 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks for understanding! Yeah, I've felt the same way about some of my creations and it's funny sometimes the simplest one or the one you do that really boring and uneventful Sunday afternoon when you're not really trying is the one that gets the most attention =P
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kimbostar Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013
Wonderfully written, hon. I can certainly relate to the subject at hand, which always makes a poem more beautiful when it can be felt by not only the author. Everything works together so well together, and the abrupt ending is very suiting for the situation.

Great work! :heart:
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gogocherryrose Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013
Thank you so much! I completely agree with you about how awesome it is to be able to relate to other people through poetry and I never ever get tired of hearing it :)

:heart:
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kimbostar Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013
:) You're welcome, hon!
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Darija-Blue Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013
This was so good. Just mindblowing, I especially loved the ending :) :rose:
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gogocherryrose Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013
Awwe!! Thank you so much :)
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xTHHxAimiForevr Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
"then you started
drinking coffee
without cream
or sugar;"

Reminds me of the scene from Airplane with the little kids.
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gogocherryrose Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013
Awwe I don't think I have seen that one lol
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greenhairedfae Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Student
Would you mind if I were to make a comic of this?
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gogocherryrose Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013
Sure! As long as you lemme see it when your done :)
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013   General Artist
Hooray! Hooray! Congratulations on the DD, love! :tighthug:
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gogocherryrose Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013
tehehe I was so confused when I saw the DD thinger under my poem this morning! Shocked! lol thanks :heart:
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013   General Artist
Well, you most certainly deserve it, dear friend. :huggle:
Keep being the beautiful souled girl that you are! :heart:
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gogocherryrose Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
Awwe omgosh *melts* lol :heart: thanks
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013   General Artist
Always, darling! :blowkiss:
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013
Congrats on the DD! :heart:
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gogocherryrose Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013
Thanks!! :heart:
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Itti Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
God, this is bleak. And I mean that as a compliment - it's very hard-hitting; very impactful. You do a lot with very few words. Excellent work.
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gogocherryrose Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013
Oh wow! that is indeed a compliment and I am grateful you felt that way -- thank you so much! :heart:
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anmisto Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the way you use the verse, they feel so free and unhindered
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gogocherryrose Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013
Awwe, thank you so much :heart:
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Demosthenes-H Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Student Writer
Beautifully melancholy, and the brevity is enough to make me shiver.

Well played, well played indeed.
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gogocherryrose Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013
Hehehe thank you :blush: :heart:
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0hgravity Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
congrats on the DD!! :D much deserved.
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gogocherryrose Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013
It's so awesome, finally!! :dance:

Thank you :) :heart:
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0hgravity Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:party:
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lintu47 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Congrats on the well deserved DD! :dalove:
Have a nice day! :heart:
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